Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


The truth is
That none of this is certain
The first kiss was the same as the last
In that neither ever happened
It's important we forget the promise we failed to seal

The Charm was exquisite
Trailing the sunset
In the fickle winter
Twilight
With falling star
Streak Marks

The crimson and silver
Lining the clouds--
The most beautiful
Shade of oblivion
I've ever seen

Just Rest your eyes
On the space between the darkness
Everything will be quite alright
We'll be quite alright
©2006-2010 ~glamorousxtragedy
:iconglamorousxtragedy:

Author's Comments

ohhhwow.
I haven't submitted in awhile, and yeahh.
Forgive me, I have to had to dive everyday.

nothing fancy.
make of it what you want.

c.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconmis-apologias:
"The first kiss was the same as the last
In that neither ever happened"

Something about that grabbed my attention and made me turn my music down to read this.




I'm glad I did.
Great work. :)

--
werd.
:iconkay-d:
I got two feelings when I read this piece. The beginning seemed like lovers acknowledging their love wasn't perfect, but by the end, they'd come to accept that, and continued to love each other anyway. Perhaps I'm way off, but that's the feel I got. After all, love isn't perfect and nothing is certain.

A nice piece with some great visuals. :)

--

Writing is the only thing that when I do it, I don't feel I should be doing something else.
- Gloria Steinem
:boing:

Found in these Groups:

Not currently found in a Group

Details

July 26, 2006
740 bytes

Statistics

3
0
52 (0 today)
1 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map